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Character Description (Grimy Nick)

Check through your character description for Grimy Nick and edit it to ensure you have correctly spelt (look at the word mat again as this may help) and punctuated it.

Have you used capital letters and full stops? 

Have you included any embedded relative clauses (adding extra information using the relative pronouns: which, who, whose, that, etc.)?

Have you included examples of the way he acts and speaks to show what he is like (personality) as well as the physical description?

How does he treat Jim compared to Spike (his dog)?

Please find a link below to these chapters which were posted last Friday.